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PostPosted: 14 May 2006 05:21 pm Reply with quoteEdit/Delete this postDelete this postView IP address of posterBack to top
Tenebrion
I'm sort of semi-working on restoring the whole story to it's former glory and beyond by fixing the syntax and some spelling errors. There's still mountains of them left in the threads I've fixed (The Forest and Paths) because it's boring to fix them, and they'll probably stay there.
I've also copied the contents of a few of Moony's saved threads made new threads with it and deleted the original thread so that I may edit them. And because I like seeing my name all over the place.
Isadora lordofMordor
It's a good idea, Tenebrion. You will see that mine are not mountains of mistakes. I write by willing to make less as it's possible. Ortograph is my strenght.
Tenebrion Himself
You're taking over the story again. We're still undetected, which means that he won't be able to talk to you. If I want him to talk to you, I'll say so. Deleted.
Isadora lordofMordor
oups... sorry. I was so thinking about my storylines.
Tenebrion Himself
Your last post was also deleted for the same reason. I'll get pissed off the next time. Or pretend to get pissed off, at least. You have been forewarned.
Isadora lordofMordor
I'm just so sorry. You know, it's hard sometimes to be keeping in my character without taking over the story unperpose. I didn't want to take your job, it's just that I did it sometimes without wanting it like this. I hope that you understand this.
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Keep it in mind. Write it down and keep the paper close to the monitor so you'll always see it. Write it down fifty times. On your arm. With a tattoo gun.
Isadora lordofMordor
Euh... just to keep it in my long memory will be ok. Luckily for me, I have a good long memory... but I will not risk with my shorter because it's scrapped because of long years in school. So, I'll be able to remind it... how did you find my last post in the story? It's ok, this one, I think...
Here is what my character discovered by hearing the ancient dark speech using by the guy: Isadora belongs to the Ancient World and she was a princess and a dark elemental mage at the same time through this world full of demons. The guy has the weapon that was her: a very long sword with runes engraved. There's the informations I just wanted you to know about my character. You'll be able to take it to make some lines as the storyteller, leaving all this in your hands, not trying to take the story over.
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Isadora
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I don't know if you know it but we are back here and you'll be able to continue to work on you story. MoonRaven works on it to copy it and I work with her to put mine completely here. You'll see new stuff in my section. It's all I can tell you, dear Tenebrion.
Oh! I finally introduce my third and last character in my last post in the section the castle on the Glade section. I will just tell you that his name is Draco and that he has a lot of history... and great knowledge. Has the story goes, you'll see his weakness. I'm not telling it right now, you'll see it when time will be come.
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PostPosted: 17 May 2006 06:28 am Reply with quoteEdit/Delete this postDelete this postView IP address of posterBack to top
Draco died.
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Paul has resurrected him with his special powers.
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PostPosted: 17 May 2006 12:18 pm Reply with quoteEdit/Delete this postDelete this postView IP address of posterBack to top
and i took care of the sword
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Fiew! I'm gonna check it.
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and plz no repairing sword
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Don't be worry, I'm not doing it. Deadly things are to be leave better in pieces than intact.
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PostPosted: 19 May 2006 04:48 pm Reply with quoteEdit/Delete this postDelete this postView IP address of posterBack to top
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It is evident that you will never be able to function in an RP with other people. Three characters are two too many, and when the GM kills off one, writes dead underlined and says that the character in question is dead in the discussion thread, that character is supposed to stay dead. Anyone understands that. I'm tired of you breaking the rules. The numerous complaints I recieve about you also helped guide my hand in this decision, which shouldn't really surprise you.
In short: I want you to completely leave my RP and never write in it again. You don't have to make a goodbye post, I'll post a copy of this in the discussion thread.
Again: no more posting in my RP.
Everyone: if Isadora posts anything again, just ignore it untill a mod removes it.
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I know, I should not post here but I just want to tell something: I was at my own forum when you wrote this and when I saw the posts in the discussions, it was too late to change my storylines. It was not fair at all. If you want to tell more, just pm me. Please, give me one last chance!
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PostPosted: 19 May 2006 07:25 pm Reply with quoteEdit/Delete this postDelete this postView IP address of posterBack to top
I've given you plenty of warnings and I've been more than lenient towards you. Another chance wouldn't change anything. I suggest you focus on the other RP's.
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Ok, I understand that you don't want to give me a last chance. I'll focus on the other RP as you told me... it's just too bad.
I'll try to talk to you again in a week or two... maybe things will have changes... anyway, I'm hoping it.
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PostPosted: 26 May 2006 09:43 am Reply with quoteEdit/Delete this postDelete this postView IP address of posterBack to top
Hmm, seems like the guidelines has been amended with guidelines for battle... Wonder what will come from this?
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a death gaurd who is attacked by the party after he swalowed the gem ?
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PostPosted: 26 May 2006 08:15 pm Reply with quoteEdit/Delete this postDelete this postView IP address of posterBack to top
It's actually just Raou that can see the room, since they're all on a ladder, but it's ok as long as you're just discussing it.
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So how do you all think of the story and such? What should there be more/less of?
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It's pretty nice.
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I think it's forming beautifully, more importantly, what do you think?
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PostPosted: 27 Jul 2006 05:51 pm Reply with quoteEdit/Delete this postDelete this postView IP address of posterBack to top
I think it's heading in the right direction now. Perhaps the battle took a little too long and I'd like to know if you guys would prefer few long fights, many short ones or some other configuration in the future?
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Maybe a few long boss fights and some minor fights as well?