Patojonas's "ART" attempts

[Patojonas]

Anyway, started this months and months ago and had planned to finish it someday (also stopped months ago), still might, who knows. Since the LP forums are gone there's no way to place it, but it was supposed to finish the ongoing adventures in the battle with members - deep story topic in the roleplaying section. Might as well let it see the light of dah internets.

[b]Please let me know how much my writing skills suck. Seriously, go all out with your criticism as long as you're serious [/b]

[i]By the way, Reigna was swimming in the forum's lake and found a underwater cave, we went down there to investigate and at some point on the tunnel the story resumes where this document starts [/i]

[url]https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B1SugLe ... sp=sharing[/url]

[MoonRaven]

wooooooooooow I love it, nice way of writing, easy to read and yes tempting to read on and on......... just one more sentence and more and more, yes it is a winner!

[Patojonas]

heh, thanks for being nice!

Now, seriously, would you buy a book with this kind of writing?

[MoonRaven]

Yes I would if I have money to burn, but still depends on the price.

[Patojonas]

just asked because I figure that's a good way of assessing quality :wink

[Mike]

Yo, thought I can offer some info here: if you're planning on publishing stuff send а query letter when book's ready to an agent interested in the appropriate genre. You'll have your stuff evaluated by a professional and get things going at the same time. Nothing to lose by doing that.

[Patojonas]

if I ever write a full book I'll do that lol, thanks :wink